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This poem is from you
Written down by me
Although it isn't mine
It's yours, don't you see?

I write down the words
but they come from your mind
even though you don't know
what you leave behind

I pick up what's left
and put it all together
I don't know what I do
but it's for the better

You say you can't write
but that's not your need
Just simply be there for me
it's the poet inside me you feed
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I put down the words, but I'm not my own inspiration.
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~StarinaSparda May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How sweet...very lovely
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~Wiliart May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^_^
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~pieladyUSA May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how the reader is directly involved with this. I think the ending is a little shaky due to the syllables, but as a whole, this is unique. I think something that goes a little more in depth would add on to this even more.
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~Wiliart May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^

It's a bit difficult sometimes to fit it all in the correct amount of syllables. Although if it alters somewhere I think it should be the end. To grab the attention a bit again.

This was just something I wrote down fast, so more in depth could come in the future.
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Mood: Love ~wingsofair May 14, 2012  Student General Artist
I didn't understand, untill the very last line. too me, that's one of the things that can make a poem beautiful.
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~Wiliart May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The first line(s) of a poem makes it grab your attention, the last line(s) makes you remember it.

Good to see you like the poem.
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Mood: Love ~Gwillis May 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love of how you personalize the poet inside of us. I'm a writer myself and this poem is perfect for me!
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~Wiliart May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Inspiration comes from others, they just don't always realize it ;) . The moments you have in life with others make you write poems.

It was a bit written to my girlfriend, although also to everybody else in the world. Everybody amounts to everything for a little bit.
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