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Get me away from this black hole
That's stirring within me
Pulling away all emotions
Only a void left behind

Without you I feel empty
Only you can fill this black hole
make it go away
to return again
when you're gone

My emotions and feelings
Wander around in circles
go up and down
from left to right
High when you're with me
Much too deep when I'm left alone

Come to me again
Let me feel and nothing more
No void eating me up
Leaving only the extremes
Hate and love and nothing more

Let me close you in my arms
Fill the black hole in one go
No void within me
You fill my whole heart
I feel empty when my girlfriend is not here with me. Depleted of emotions, only this emptiness left behind.
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Xirion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Love it~
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Wiliart Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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Xirion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Professional Writer
No need to thank me, I really liked it
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crazi-4-muffinz Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. It actually made me cry. Faved :)
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Wiliart Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, it's nice to see that my poem really affects you.
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crazi-4-muffinz Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :3
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queenofeagles Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh... :tighthug:

feeling any better now?
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Wiliart Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not until you're with me again.
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queenofeagles Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*hug* just wait for a few more days ;)
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