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Ambulance for you
Racing by the house
Mom just called
It races for you

Dad, don't leave me
Dad, please come back

The doctors told
your brains bleed
inside your head
your veins burst.

Dad, don't leave me
Dad, please come back

Daddy...?
This is for the lost love prompt of :iconheart-of-poetry:

I almost lost my dad to a cerebral haemorrhage, but I'm still afraid every day I'll lose him forever.

This poem is about the uncertainty, you know something bad has happened, but you don't know the end yet. The moment when you fear the most that you will lose a loved one.
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RubyDaSquirlz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
I hope he lives a lot longer. ~hugs~ I know what it's like to almost lose, and to lose, loved ones. I understand your fear. I know it's consuming. Be strong until then, Ok? We'll help support you.
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:iconwiliart:
Wiliart Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's was in the summer of 2005, but the fear still remains.
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:iconrubydasquirlz:
RubyDaSquirlz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
I know what that's like. Keep being strong. ^_^ ~hugs~
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Starija Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
...........OKAY NEVER MIND MY LAST COMMENT. i'm so stupid. it was hemorrhage LOL i forgot what that meant for a second. hehe?
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Starija Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
.....dude. this totally happened to my dad 3 weeks ago (not due to haemorrhage). he died because the internet bleeding was too much. not that i'm trying to jinx you, sorry LOL. i just submitted a poem almost similar to this, only it's more general. you were very lucky, and i'm glad you didn't lose him.
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Wiliart Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My sincere condenseness for the loss of your dad.
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Starija Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
thank you for that~
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Starija Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
internal*
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AgentBabycakes Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So poignant.
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Wiliart Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As every moment feel when a loved one is in the hospital and you don't know if they will survive.
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